Thursday, December 12, 2013

Beaches Comments

Rating: 4.5

A cool splash of water on my toes,
The sand, wind swept passed my nose,
A soft dip, to just unwind,
Nature, it's oh so kind.
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Lyn Poulton
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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

'The beach is a place that is quite surreal, It enhances the senses, just to experience and feel.' - Nice two lines to conclude the poem. Well written. I loved reading this poem.

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Lawerence Mize 17 December 2013

Lovely poem. I envisioned the beach, the waves, the wind.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

@Lawrence Mize, Nice and simple comment, loved it.

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