Beachday Haiku Comments

it makes me want to go to the beach myself.. truly poetic u are and u amazing! !

excellent you caught the essence of the sea side jim

beautiful haiku..artistic beach so inviting... the sandcastles...reminds us of our childhood days...

your pen brush seems to be so sharp that it is able to stroke a few lines and reveal a canvas much bigger than ordinary mind could hold. i like it. () BLack jaypee

whatta beautiful beach.....with sand so white and water so clear......clear for joggers to see corals better....nice lines dear... naizz

tickles imagination! lovely!