Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Beach Moments Comments

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Whenever I go to the beach
I can hear the waves come ashore
I feel the sun upon my skin
All these things I do adore
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Dee Corpolongo
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Smoky Hoss 05 September 2015

Wow, amen. The last stanza is truth to the fullest, beautiful! May we all see life in such a way that brings a smile, at least at times.

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Lyn Paul 06 February 2014

Wonderful Words Dee, the beach is my favourite place too. It truly has healing powers. I felt peace just reading these words. Thank you

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Valsa George 28 December 2013

It is a pleasant experience to be on the beach side! Yes, once again we become children and the lashing waves and the foamy curves make us suddenly excited and we jump into the rushing waves! The poem concludes with a philosophical thought that each one's existence on Earth is as insignificant as a grain of sand! ! Enjoyed! ! Wish you Dee a wonderful New Year! !

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