Beach Girl Comments

Nice work Billy, I like it! Blessings to you!

I loved it to...The rhyme is good and flows well...ends good aswell....I hope your other poems ryhme because I cant find many on this site that do, and they are the only ones that I personaly enjoy and find talent in.Keep up the good work :)

Loved it. But she surely was not a 'witch'. I think you meant to say 'which' in line 2 of the last verse. Read mine - Storm Song - Adeline

Real or imagined you did a great job telling us. I sure wish to see that painting-a smooth and sweetly flowing write

Lovely poem, brilliant finish, she was not an appartion after all, loved it.

Great mental pictures drawn here. We always want beauty to last. Great write!

Sweet memory, or just a dream! Either way it makes for a lovely poem! ! ! I really enjoyed reading it! Dawn xx