Beach (A Tanka) Comments

this poem is gay and very bad you people have no sense of taste

A short and cute composition.10 with love.

A small poem with a huge meaning, we must clean up our act and protect our environment. Well said Asma, I love when poets show concern about our precious environment, Thankyou Asma.--Melvina--

Neatly encapsulates the truth that we will have to pay for the damage we inflict on our beautiful planet

A very right and real fact, all captured so beautifully! ! yours, Nida

Wow! That's so original and earnest! What a thought Asma!

This is like a flash realisation. Really liked it Asma. Preets