Sunday, July 3, 2011

Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

The beach came back to life today,
from dreary weeks of clouds and rain.
Kids who'd seen their summer washed away
ran out with footballs, kites and spades,
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Robert Melliard
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 July 2011

Beautiful poem written well with nice texture and imagery. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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