Thursday, April 30, 2009

Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

The waves come in and go out.
Standing at the edge of the beach
I can imagine the peace that is around me.
Standing on the edge of the beach
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Athena Goddess of Wisdom Lumis Light to all
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Austin Wheeler 23 December 2009

You have your weaponry handled nicely and hit all the pressure points if you know what I mean. Something beautiful is definitely going on inside you. And I live basically on the beach so I especially liked this particular poem.

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Eyan Desir 15 December 2009

Well express... again good job...

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