Friday, February 2, 2018

Be Yourself! Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I have ten apples, and you have one
If I have a big mansion and you have none
If I have a genius brother and you a dumbo
If I have a loving mother and you have not
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Abhipsa Panda 17 January 2019

A very inspiring poem....we humans have the tendency to complain all the time, but we must be satisfied with what we have.....well penned....thanks for sharing.10

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Thank YOU for visiting my poem site Abhipsa Sie! Thank you for reading and commenting. Also for the 10. God Bless You and your beloved family.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2018

FANTASTIC! Beautifully crafted and well executed write. The flow and wording are superb. Loved the last lines. It is a perfect closure of this wonderful piece.10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2018

Thank you so much from the bottom of my being, Mrs. Juan-austin. You made my day, days long it had been dreary weather, rains-rains and constantly during 4 days. Can you imagine that your comments-compliments-feedback are like pearls laid on my frontdoor, just like that! What a completeness to end my day now, dusk is coming soon....I feel so blessed! I always appreciate your feedback-comment. Thank YOU for the 10.

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Rini Shibu 02 February 2018

Wonderful poem... I like the ending very much... Be yourself

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2018

Thank you so much for your lovely response, Rini.

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