If I have ten apples, and you have one
If I have a big mansion and you have none
If I have a genius brother and you a dumbo
If I have a loving mother and you have not
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FANTASTIC! Beautifully crafted and well executed write. The flow and wording are superb. Loved the last lines. It is a perfect closure of this wonderful piece.10
Thank you so much from the bottom of my being, Mrs. Juan-austin. You made my day, days long it had been dreary weather, rains-rains and constantly during 4 days. Can you imagine that your comments-compliments-feedback are like pearls laid on my frontdoor, just like that! What a completeness to end my day now, dusk is coming soon....I feel so blessed! I always appreciate your feedback-comment. Thank YOU for the 10.
A very inspiring poem....we humans have the tendency to complain all the time, but we must be satisfied with what we have.....well penned....thanks for sharing.10
Thank YOU for visiting my poem site Abhipsa Sie! Thank you for reading and commenting. Also for the 10. God Bless You and your beloved family.