Be Your Lady Comments

i'll put this into June's showcase ASAP! bri :)

your gone.........ooops! you're i don't care where you been...........in prose i would use...you've been ;) i normally would in poetry as well. what you have done? ...........normally i would type what have you done? ging, did you mean to type ghing in the last line? hmm? maybe? why? or just a typo? i really like this, though 'love poems' are not my favorite genre. I RARELY use the word 'genre'; it seems so fancy! ha ha. if he doesn't show up, maybe i can help? hee-hee to MyPoemList, .................even though it IS a 'love poem' bri :)

Whoever the man is, it seems he would do quite well to be found by you, love-struck poet! God's speed to you.

Hope! ! With the muse of love. Nice work.