Be With Me..... Comments

''sole I walk, as the man of the hour cease to face in the ground, I’ve come home, for a parting goodbye tells me, to live my dear beloved One close dear my eyes, the distance has to catch the end''.....all lines complment the title. but for me, the highlight is the last line where the weight of the thought is stressed.....so nice and so beautiful tony..... ''CLOSE DEAR MY EYES, THE DISTANCE HAS TO CATCH THE END''...ilike this line from ur piece...