** Be With Me ** Comments

A wonderful poem, very appealing! The title attracts and the text convinces the readers that you are a poet of natural talent.10/10 from me.

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Compelling and creative to the core. Well done my friend! 10/10

If no one is there. I will surely respond and will be with you as u requested me in your poem (provided u wrote the poem for me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !)

Added to my fav.......

Very lovely poem, Anjali, sweet and wistful, the words are simple and the emotions genuine.

This is really a beautiful poem, Anjali. Merry Xmas and a very Happy New year! ! Naseer

You have talent so much it is just not shown enough on PH and I just cannot figure it out when compared to some of the leaders of this poetic showcase then again your poetic words stand by themself, , , , of your poem I will add a line form a poem I have not posted yet ' Tears caress my eyes and yet do not fall ' So good your poems++++10 regards To you and your family have a wonderful xmas and a pocketful of fallen stars from my family and I

Let this stream of love transform, Into an ocean deep, To drown your troubles in its abyss, And wash you ashore alongwith your love.

so touching, Anju.... A sweet plea comes out from your heart.... deep emotions reveal and dwells with your enchanting words enchanting enough to capture our hearts... as always, you never write a piece that doesn't mesmerize us.. thanks for sharing Anju... 10 Lovelots, Snow

No winters last forever No storms blow forever Then I revel in the rhythm of the Beats of your heart. O come then, come to my heart and be with me Oh, Anjali, you kill us with this poem - oh, so so beautiful, so moving, so right-there in the soul, in every inch of the body. Yes, there must be heaven, this poem can only be surpassed by the joy of heaven. No winters last forever, no storms last for ever, whatever riles our spirit, love will wipe it all away and.....come, come then, come live in me and make me alive again. brilliantly human. mark

bravo, bravo....it's truly marvelous write dear anju and i loved it...each and every word of it and it definitely added ti one of my most favs...as you are one of my most favs. poet here on PH....many 10'sssss.....missing u and your precious words :) God Bless You My Friend rgds asif

Particularly I like the beginning.. a guy would be dump not to come to you.

Tis ever your way, mistress of love's sweet ever lasting wordplay, from honeyed lips the sweet words say be with me another day... Andy 10

A wonderful poem originating from the emotion of the heart.Very nice similes/metaphors/imageries are contained within the poem.

When enemies crowd or friends flea Be with me When there is tide or ebb in the life’s sea Be with me When Chest swells or knee totters Be with me...............a good write....10+++.....

Thy name, etched with blood of my soul Then come to my heart and be with me...................... passion riffles by luscious glow as heart needs resonance of redness as gleams of love enlighten soul love etches rhythm in ech speckles of blood.................utterly evocative by passion longing of love, wrought ingenious by metaphors,10++++, thanks for sharing

Wow, what a very romantic poem, full of true feelings and also very well penned, you definitely got my vote,10+++, great job, keep it up, I also hope the love of your life will be with you...Love and Peace...

Anjali: A beautifully written poem and I do hope that soon your lover will be with you. I like the structure and hope to read more of your work. Your friend Lynn

Very interesting to read the developing thoughts of the poem!