Be Wary Comments

The wealth within is in our minds.++10

Going after wealth Is like trying to catch a bird It involves great craft Demands drill and discipline... great theme. A meaningful poem shared.

The lessons of money are many for those that have money and those who don't. I love the likening to a bird and means of acquiring money. I do daydream guiltily sometimes of having a lot of money..... to have that spending power would be ultimate security in the materialist world. Yet, I know money would not save me from illness, a terrible fate, or buy genuine love and happiness, so for now I am grateful for what I do have.10

Some shoot it down to death! Nice piece of work.

in the hands of a fool it will soon be gone few becomes rich even fewer can hold on to it thanks Valsa-10

Loved the poem for its great sense of humour. Wealth is such a thing that everyone loves to have but is unsure to admit.

But be wary, when you deal with it It will die, if you hold it too tight It will fly off your grip If you hold it too loose. A great write...................10

A fantastic poem indeed......Valsa......great imagery with great composition on creation of wealth with different skills......great piece

Unread this poem was lying here for long! Probably it is one of the unique shafts shot from your bow of philosophic learning. The fact however, remains logically inconclusive as to whether the questions of chasing or denouncing wealth have never taught any major lesson to humanity ever since the funeral of barter system. It is a poem that is another feather to the cap of your contributions dear Madam Valsa.