Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Be Very Free Comments

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No matter, what's your race.
No matter, what'sthe cost.
Always, be free follow your own pace.
Don't give up go after the others&be lost.
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anthony fiji
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Lea Fgh 07 October 2009

I have to agree with Quin, the last Stanza is so powerful. loved it

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Quin Faas 07 October 2009

The last stanza is power. I'm impressed. And in the third stanza you make strength stir inside me...when you write..scream for the truth..don't keep it hidden.

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