James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Monday, December 8, 2008

Be*upon Your Head A Crown * Comments

Rating: 0.0

Wild was time when racing by
stars could count the years
spinning earth into the yawn
nearing morning dawn.
...
Read full text

James McLain
COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 18 August 2019

line 7: " wanning" , waning**** (definition 2) , or wanting? ? " wane /wān/ or present participle: **** waning 1 - " (of the moon) have a progressively smaller part of its visible surface illuminated, so that it appears to decrease in size." 2 - " (especially of a condition or feeling) decrease in vigor, power, or extent; become weaker." I esp. like: " Past has flown to present now" comming...coming :) bri :)

0 0 Reply

My heart raced back through time...Oh if I had known then what I know now! Your poem has deep meaning...It really is lovelly. Dorothy

0 0 Reply
James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Close
Error Success