Be Thou Not Brutal Comments
Dear friends and kin
This be my exhorting
Walk not the path of treachery
Gaze the heaven with clemency
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OK. This is good. But I am concerned about the repetitivness of the phrase be thou not brutal in between the lines.. i think it is too much of it.. i think it would have be better if it was stanza-links rather linking lines of one stanza... so i think.. but it is a good poem still..
Ifedayo, thanks for the observation, good friend. Your advice has been followed.
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7/28/2025 2:33:04 AM # 1.0.0
I enjoyed the flow and the beautiful rhyme. Good one there
Allotey, I am delighted with you comment.