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There so much passion in your poetry...its lovely

I like this one the best of what I have seen, so far. Word choice, flow, and brevity were all effective.

wow, i love the Rhythm of this poem, your quite the poet.

I like this poem's repetition of beginning words. It gives the poem a crispness that conveys a lot of meaning with simple words. The words are very carefully chosen. This is the ideal poem to read because it is short and very poetic. I hate to read long poems. Very good poem.

for such a young age you have a very strong hold on words...in the words of sherrie, strong and beautiful sums this poem up perfectly...never stop writing

i like it. its cute, yet it has a very strong voice. you like good charlotte? me too...