Saturday, October 17, 2015

Be There Comments

Rating: 4.2

With you
Somehow it all lights up,
The shadowy corners, the grim crevices
Inside my soul
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Nosheen Irfan
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Akhtar Jawad 10 August 2018

When we are with a loved one our mood is a pleasure, and mood is capable of changing the nature as well.

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Bharati Nayak 20 January 2018

And you don’t have to say a word For even your silence echoes in my head Just be there, in your own way, - - - - - - -Such lovely lines- - Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 11 November 2016

The reader is free to make his own interpretation. To me the poem reflects the sentiments of a lover for his or her partner and the sense of over all well being that it instills.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 August 2016

That's all i ask for. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Full of feelings that grows into a deluge of desire.Lovely lines my friendm

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 October 2015

it all lights up, The shadowy corners, the grim crevices Inside my soul. Ev3en your silence echoes. Just a glance. Be there for me Wonderful expressions of deep love. it is amazing to see what all the human mind is capable of. thank you tony

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Musawir Raakh 17 October 2015

Yes, true love can be satisfied even with a glance of beloved, good 1, keep it up

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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