Friday, September 14, 2018

Be The Self.... Comments

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You must be yourself
a virtue from a quarter to Florin
I tell you, this hurts a lot
too much poison goes into this venom
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2022

This is a value laden piece dear poetess SFC. Stay blessed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2022

Thank you so much dear Dr. Swain, your response is appreciated very much. Stay blessed. Thank you a very lot for your precious visit.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 September 2018

Sylvia, such an excellent write........................

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2018

Thank you so much for your constant support in your generous comments and compliments.GBU in Abundance.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2018

Too much poison goes into this venom and this hurts very much. This is really very thought provoking. It is painful but still we hope pain will be removed by love and care. With the grandest, the fairest and the purest love given unconditionally a great relationship and victory can be brought up. This poem is very deeply philosophical and excellently penned.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2018

Thank you so much for your feedback, generous compliments and honest comments. They mean a very lot to me. Once again, my sincere gratitude, Mr. Kumarmani Sir, my master poet! GBU in Abundance.

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