Monday, June 24, 2013

Be The One Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to be the one
you forever write my name
in the sand
and lay in fields
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* Sunprincess * 30 January 2016

..........super romantic and so lovely....one of the best love poems I've ever read...I loved every line and every word of this love poem....especially violets of passion ♡....and these lines are super amazing ★ I want to be the one you feel upon your skin like the morning sun loving you always and then some

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Jonathan H. Scott 13 September 2013

I especially like the first stanza. Nice.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 June 2013

Wow! Sich a romantic write, it touched my heart. Siya_! !

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Don Nguyen 24 June 2013

So romantic ballad, I love it. You have most tender and touching way to translate love. Thanks

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