Be The Moon Comments

So soft... so gently illuminating.... your pen was filled with moonbeams perhaps? Reads that way anyway- -reads like a poem trailing moonlight to guide us through the shadowy paths

don't hide scars and spread your light, beautiful way to see and say it in a poem. a positive message

This is a very characteristic NOSHEEN POEM. It sets a lovely scene with the beauty of nature movingly evoked to carry your message. And that message always includes a sense of sympathy for someone who doesn; t have access to the Joy you highlight. The Moon itself is a fickle friend, if y0u were the moon it would shed consoling light consistently. And we would rejoice at your fidelity!

Like the brave full moon in your photo, a sparkling poem to match. This is a very good and wise poem.

Well reading Kumarmani's comments I could only think that I was glad that he had read them. Interesting and revealing how the calm, soothing handful of words work their magic. Reading each syllable so light yet with the weight of wisdom, so natural like a handful of moon dust.

What an original title. So much in so few words. A great meditation on courage and vulnerability. The last line feels like a little bit of heaven . Oh to be the moon! ! ! ! Wonderful Nosheen

A cute little poem and a lovely image! Yes, let us be the moon, shedding a little light in darkness!

To be a moon sometimes is a nice idea but to be a life giving sun always is a greater idea.

Spread your light but not hide your face.. Lovely poem

This night with beautiful imagery shines with hope and love. Spreading light we feel beautiful moon here is interesting. An amazing sharing is done definitely. Thoughtfully penned poem is shared.10

Very nice. A strong message for all to share love and to leave a mark that will be followed by brave and kind. Thanks for sharing.

Spread your light but do not hide your scars! The art of penning a short poem that it powerful is a skill that few poets master, you are indeed one of them that has, a poem should light up a path as your moon has for us! Very well written.10+++++

Spread your light, but not hide your scars Be the moon, sometimes. Wow.. what a beautiful line dear poetess! Loved it.10 for this lovely poem. Subhas

Nice expression, , , face the night with a flat, , l liked the way u presented your theme. Thanks. You