Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Be Strong Comments

Rating: 4.5

to much to give in
to hard to break down
people live to stay strong
give up to give frown
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Christopher Leone
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Coreena Dejesus 17 June 2008

very good Chris. Thanks for sharing.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 06 June 2008

Hello poet some great tywists in this ppoem, thoughtful good read. Have you read my poem 'I Must Be Strong? ' Please take a look. Thanks, Loyd

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Csdb Kind 31 May 2008

show the world its true by doing

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Tamer Mymind 31 May 2008

hey chris u are so talented man and its a great idea to write abt this topic keep it up ;)

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Ashley Burnam 31 May 2008

Hey there. This is kinda good. Im not sure if I like the fourth line but i like the message this poem sends. Keep up the good work. Keep writing.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 31 May 2008

Hello Chris. A very good ehthusiastic poem. Thanks for sharing and be sure to check out my poems. Loyd

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Gi Galen 30 May 2008

Perfectly, I like your optimism … 10!

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james w foulk 30 May 2008

a very good poem i give it a ten. it is a good thing you did post it on poem hunter, keep on writing.

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Stacy Bea 29 May 2008

good poem one part i like... stay strong: -) , i try to fight life.

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wow i like it good job....come check out my poems and tell me your input...thx again Chris Jessica Elizondo

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Clarissa Tobey 29 May 2008

i think you are a good write so far lets see about the rest i don't really read many poems by random people but i have enjoyed this one.

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 May 2008

relentless effort till the end, , , like it

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Seema Chowdhury 28 May 2008

a very sweet and encouraging poem. we must not stop till we are dead, a very good motto.

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Serenity Prayer 28 May 2008

good poem. i totally agree.

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