... Be Strong Poem by Eyan Desir

Nicely written. The theme is very fitting for our current times, and others to be sure. It truly did spark some thought. Thanks for the write, Ty Robertson

A coward dies many a death, while a brave man dies once-this poem proves this saying.

very powerful write my dear poet. very sacrificial. great explanations too. and good description as well.

Your first stanze brought pictures of Refugees lining up for their bread and Betrayal, Politicians - the metaphor so apt, wolves in sheep's clothing. What to say - are we fools to trust or or they wiser, to take advantage of our goodness and trusting spirit, With GOd's help I'd rather be a Fool! Thanks for a stirring and inspiring poem, Eyan. Angel

short but unimaginably powerful, you are a truly gifted poet

very inspiring... you realy had thre gift in those simple words, no need to dig on my thick dictionary its simple to understand and easy to feed the mind! great!

........The hands of God Man will learn to be strong nice! ! ! ! ! The God is really our strength. Be strong and blessed! !

determination is success.... here's my favorite line...Blow your nose, not your mind

give yourself a 10+++ It has the inference of a traditional Haiku that hangs in the mind for a lot longer than three lines. the 'mouth' s fight to eat the bread' along with the, ' Vultures that make more bread' compeling lines for mind's that find the, 'mana of life' is in the messages, emotions, and feelings conveyed in poetry. nice job! ! !

Dear poet, Difficult times reveal our characters. Hard times is a solid ground where miracles can be forged, hope can abound and life prove itself beyond our expectations. There´s a always a blessing disguised as despair and suffering... Nice doing! Thanks for sharing.