Be Still (Pantoum) Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth in verse with rhythmic splendour. Lovely and very passionate.

Why are sad things often for the best? The time for me to leave is growing near. We watch the day fade slowly into night.. so wonderfully portrayed the scene of parting and love and relationship.. than ku dear poet............ yes sad moments unite us more and more in love. tony

A very sad moment, ........the moment one had to part from one's dearest, portrayed beautifully. Actually I felt it in my heart. Thanks for sharing the wonderful poem. x

The time for me to leave is growing near. We watch the day fade slowly into night. the pain and struggle and sadness of parting is very well portrayed in poetic terms. thank you very much. tony