I saw your tears in dawn’s soft light
As close beside you then I lay
Within my arms I held you tight
To ease you through another day
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It is so endearing for the beloved that words cannot explain, ...... very nice
Beautiful title as the tide of feelings expressed at a heart wreching time so sad...life goes on... 'we'll meet again' fills the poem...regards
Never ever i felt so touched after reading somebody 's poem... these poems are realyy very beautiful
Glad to have you back Valerie. Your poem echoes and resonates deep and emotional words of love and expressions of strength. To so lovingly bring this to the center of your poems is very encouraging. You are a poetess of the greatest caliber. Very heartfelt and touching.
This is a wonderful poem, I especially like the last two lines.
Your beautiful words always playing a heartfelt emotion in everybody..loved it_Soul
True love soothes the broken heart of loved one...it cares to inspire!
Oh no dis is such a sadening dirge like poem, must hav been hard writin it, how d ink must hav combined with tears here. But its a commendable peaceful drifting poem to a dying belovd! Pls do chk out my latest on d statue of lib... Warm regards.
This is so beautiful, Val, a sonnet written with such love....and heart filled sadness that leaves you feeling so alone.... I pray this gets bearable for you, and soon you realize it is only a temporary separation..... and.this is a beautiful dedication.{{{hugs}}}
It is a poem that speaks a lot about your great love that never shrinks Valerie. It is nice you have started visiting the P.H and it is time for you to submit more periodically..
Impressive poem Val. Sorry for your loss. Rhythm change unintentional! Richard Anders.
its very beautiful, achingly so, its an expression of love, longing and pain interwoven in an excellent piece. :)
A sweet sad song of separation that is loaded with love and loss!