Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Be Still My Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

I saw your tears in dawn’s soft light
As close beside you then I lay
Within my arms I held you tight
To ease you through another day
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Valerie Dohren
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A sweet sad song of separation that is loaded with love and loss!

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Sofia Kioroglou 04 February 2016

Lovely poem! Full of love and emotion.

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Joe Hughes 30 December 2015

Romantic, comforting and leaking love

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Amitava Sur 14 April 2014

It is so endearing for the beloved that words cannot explain, ...... very nice

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Ken E Hall 10 November 2013

Beautiful title as the tide of feelings expressed at a heart wreching time so sad...life goes on... 'we'll meet again' fills the poem...regards

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Kanav Justa 01 November 2013

Never ever i felt so touched after reading somebody 's poem... these poems are realyy very beautiful

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Marvin Brato 28 October 2013

Wonderful poem expressing romance filling the moment!

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Robert Green 24 October 2013

So very heartfelt................................

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Patricia Grantham 23 October 2013

Glad to have you back Valerie. Your poem echoes and resonates deep and emotional words of love and expressions of strength. To so lovingly bring this to the center of your poems is very encouraging. You are a poetess of the greatest caliber. Very heartfelt and touching.

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Kavya . 23 October 2013

magical words of love put together into a wonderful poem

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Godfrey Morris 22 October 2013

This is a wonderful poem, I especially like the last two lines.

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Unwritten Soul 21 October 2013

Your beautiful words always playing a heartfelt emotion in everybody..loved it_Soul

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Marvin Brato 21 October 2013

True love soothes the broken heart of loved one...it cares to inspire!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 October 2013

Oh no dis is such a sadening dirge like poem, must hav been hard writin it, how d ink must hav combined with tears here. But its a commendable peaceful drifting poem to a dying belovd! Pls do chk out my latest on d statue of lib... Warm regards.

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Dee Corpolongo 20 October 2013

This is so beautiful, Val, a sonnet written with such love....and heart filled sadness that leaves you feeling so alone.... I pray this gets bearable for you, and soon you realize it is only a temporary separation..... and.this is a beautiful dedication.{{{hugs}}}

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Dinesan Madathil 20 October 2013

It is a poem that speaks a lot about your great love that never shrinks Valerie. It is nice you have started visiting the P.H and it is time for you to submit more periodically..

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John Brown 19 October 2013

I'm glad you posted it Val, it's lovely.

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Richard Price 19 October 2013

Impressive poem Val. Sorry for your loss. Rhythm change unintentional! Richard Anders.

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David Wood 19 October 2013

Lovely poem Val, it echo's my poem To My Sweet Love.

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Lucifera Santez 18 October 2013

its very beautiful, achingly so, its an expression of love, longing and pain interwoven in an excellent piece. :)

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