Sunday, August 24, 2008

Be Still My Heart. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Be still my heart.
Be not disturbed, as violently
Your beats reverb with passion unforeseen.
He who pledged a lifelong love
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Fay Slimm
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Bonnie Collins 27 September 2008

Enjoyed this very much and I will tell you I was attracted to the title...Excellent write about the trials and tribulations of mending a broken heart... Very tender write... bonnie

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Carl Harris 24 September 2008

This very beautiful, poignant, sad, and moving romantic poem was a delight to read and savor, Fay. It is written so wonderfully, with great word selection and imagery it's whole length. Your concluding words were brilliant! Carl.

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Tia Maria 19 September 2008

thank you Fay - you are right, a little more self therapy :)

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Bob Gibson 03 September 2008

A lovely poem Fay, hearts heal, he has nothing that belongs to you now, only empty memories of what could have been.regards Bob There is an emptiness felt when they depart because they've wrenched your heart apart that pure love more precious than gold will wither with in him for years untold

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Ernestine Northover 02 September 2008

Lovely poem. A real find and a beautiful piece of writing. Woven with flair and care. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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ten + ten + ten - very deserving of high points. wonderfully expressed

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 August 2008

This is wonderful Fay....You brought out the mood and play of words so gracefully...very good poem 10+++

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Tom Balch 24 August 2008

Yes, heart on sleeve Fay, I love the the flow of this piece regards Tom 10+

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Fay Slimm

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