Thursday, August 15, 2013

Be Still Beating Heart Comments

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your pounding intrudes me.
It fills me with pains;
I ache with sorrow of thee.
You tell me to love,
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Adam M Snow
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Noreen Carden 27 January 2014

Thjs conversation with your heart asking why it lets you love when you may not be loved in return makes a very very beautiful poem.Your way with words is fantastic.Be still my beating heart indeed well done

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Dannielle Smedley 18 August 2013

This is wonderful! :)

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Gajanan Mishra 15 August 2013

love and love, good poem, thanks, I like it.

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Adam M Snow

Adam M Snow

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