Be Still... Comments

poetry is larger than life, so goes the cliche... but it really is. brilliant thoughts..! kumusta...

I love your play on words - well, that's what poetry's all about, isn't it? - pen unleashing words that elude me.. can wisdom function in this walled thought.. worlds that cannot exist brought into existence. I manage such thoughts sometimes but they don't come out so smoothly, like these..i love this..a 10 all the way

well perfected reflection of life.... so candid... i love to read

very well done compactness of the refrerence is so well maitained

words that elude me........ excellent selection of words. well done.

...very picturesque fiction... ...if you are still like this...I wan t your stillness...

dont worry about the wall...our thoughts can always build windows anywhere it liked

break the walls explore the thought within unleashes the colors of desire embracing rainbow and our freedom would embark beyond horizon