Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Be Somebody Comments

Rating: 5.0

do good in school thats what i've been told
am i strong enough to follow my goals, am i bold?
be someone not trash
enjoy school too because it goes by in a flash
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Robin Machorro 27 July 2010

wow i loved this poems! its so hard living up to your parents needs and everything

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Monica Arlene 17 May 2010

In this poem, the glass is half full :)

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Michael Brock 19 April 2010

Very good, intense with good imagery and flow. Good Poem, I like that you take the positive side and push to succeed. I think you did succeed in this poem very well. thanks for sharing it Michael

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Cody Averesch 29 March 2010

that is o so very true

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Iron Panda 23™ 25 March 2010

\^-^/ i love it! !

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