Friday, June 12, 2009

Be Safe, Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wailing tunes of the long lost child.
Her father’s ways the cause of her cry.
So many lovely young ones wish to die.
Because they know not love, tears fill their eyes.
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Leslie Alexis
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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 05 December 2009

Excellent poem…you too stay as ‘Be Safe’ Ten+ dr.sakti

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Honest Heart 01 July 2009

Awesome poem...it is full of honest emotion...you are really great writer and great friend...i am praying for your friend...i am asking my God to help her...GOOD LUCK... Keep writing your wonderful poems my friend ....

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Eyan Desir 26 June 2009

You have so many words.... Good use of them Leslie....romantic write top marks

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Shawnee Gonzalez 22 June 2009

i pray for everyone in the world and this poem just makes me want to pray even more you are an amazing poet and i can see just like me you write what you feel and what needs to be written about. ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥

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Anjali Sinha 18 June 2009

Yes Les I am praying I am --for your friend

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Luwi Habte 14 June 2009

you are a good poet and a good friend too both at all thanks for sharing May God give you all your desire luwi

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Leslie, Your soul is so beautiful and your intentions honorable, to help this child find her way back out of the dark. Sometimes, it only takes a friend to really care, and that can make all the difference. The poem is heartfelt and amazing. The words pour from your pen and the images you have created have all been blessed by God......10 Karin Anderson

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DaNa XxX 14 June 2009

this is really good my friend! ! ! ! ! well done, , ! 10+... and amen to your prayer..! ! your amigo, DaNa...

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Evaughn Gray 14 June 2009

This is a very good poem, so full of emotion. It is just a wonderful piece that many will love to read again and again.. beautiful write. ~ Hazel G.E

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awwww, i'm still speechless by this poem Leslie... this is indeed my all time favorite, thank you so much.... .... gosh....i'm tired of crying though :) .....guess i should stop re-reading it then.... this is simply amazing +10 from me... and amen to your prayers friend.

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 13 June 2009

Meaningful and beautiful. Nice Write

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Louis Rams 13 June 2009

all doubts will be taken away, for in your heart she will stay, as the guardian angels watch her from day to day and from all of us, we do pray.

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Rosalita Fernandez 13 June 2009

I hope she is ok too, I wish she is ok, lovely poem x

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Chitra - 13 June 2009

a heartfelt prayer...for a shattered soul...

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~ Jon London ~ 13 June 2009

Leslie, please let me apologise for my lateness in visiting PH lately, but I've been rushed off my feet promoting my new book, but I'm happy to be back viewing and commenting again..been a while my friend....your poem shows so much feeling, expressed with full heart...your angel must sit with a loving smile....fantastic write...keep'm coming

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Howard Kern 13 June 2009

Your lost angel is a very lucky girl to have friend like you.their is no scale for this poem. It is a rally cry for an Army of true beleiver's to pray for your frinds wellbeing and protection.And sir you have tappedinto the Holy Army of the South. Their are many prayers going out for your friend< and you also! ONE LOVE, howard

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Carl Harris 13 June 2009

A very expressive poem, Leslie, and I have no problem offering a prayer for this unfortunate person. Carl.

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 13 June 2009

A good poem. I will.

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Greenwolfe 1962 13 June 2009

I will Les. It was just lovely! GW62

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Anjali Sinha 13 June 2009

lovely poem i felt like crying--- your poem brings out the emotions so nicely also brings out the tears in ones eyes sure my prayers with your little angel -10 anjali

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