The wailing tunes of the long lost child.
Her father’s ways the cause of her cry.
So many lovely young ones wish to die.
Because they know not love, tears fill their eyes.
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Awesome poem...it is full of honest emotion...you are really great writer and great friend...i am praying for your friend...i am asking my God to help her...GOOD LUCK... Keep writing your wonderful poems my friend ....
You have so many words.... Good use of them Leslie....romantic write top marks
i pray for everyone in the world and this poem just makes me want to pray even more you are an amazing poet and i can see just like me you write what you feel and what needs to be written about. ♥ §♥ shawnee♥ §♥
you are a good poet and a good friend too both at all thanks for sharing May God give you all your desire luwi
Leslie, Your soul is so beautiful and your intentions honorable, to help this child find her way back out of the dark. Sometimes, it only takes a friend to really care, and that can make all the difference. The poem is heartfelt and amazing. The words pour from your pen and the images you have created have all been blessed by God......10 Karin Anderson
this is really good my friend! ! ! ! ! well done, , ! 10+... and amen to your prayer..! ! your amigo, DaNa...
This is a very good poem, so full of emotion. It is just a wonderful piece that many will love to read again and again.. beautiful write. ~ Hazel G.E
awwww, i'm still speechless by this poem Leslie... this is indeed my all time favorite, thank you so much.... .... gosh....i'm tired of crying though :) .....guess i should stop re-reading it then.... this is simply amazing +10 from me... and amen to your prayers friend.
all doubts will be taken away, for in your heart she will stay, as the guardian angels watch her from day to day and from all of us, we do pray.
Leslie, please let me apologise for my lateness in visiting PH lately, but I've been rushed off my feet promoting my new book, but I'm happy to be back viewing and commenting again..been a while my friend....your poem shows so much feeling, expressed with full heart...your angel must sit with a loving smile....fantastic write...keep'm coming
Your lost angel is a very lucky girl to have friend like you.their is no scale for this poem. It is a rally cry for an Army of true beleiver's to pray for your frinds wellbeing and protection.And sir you have tappedinto the Holy Army of the South. Their are many prayers going out for your friend< and you also! ONE LOVE, howard
A very expressive poem, Leslie, and I have no problem offering a prayer for this unfortunate person. Carl.
lovely poem i felt like crying--- your poem brings out the emotions so nicely also brings out the tears in ones eyes sure my prayers with your little angel -10 anjali
Excellent poem…you too stay as ‘Be Safe’ Ten+ dr.sakti