Be Restored My Broken Pen Comments

Dela: First may I thank you for your comments on my poems. This one I too have read. The title intrigued me and I was not disappointed. Writers block, perhaps? Adeline

The pen can be restored by the heart strong enough to bring out the words lost. A wonderful piece.

Very well written with a good music of writing. Nice

When writing is deep in your soul, nothing will stop that, not a broken pen, nothing. Great message, Obed. Hugs, Marilyn

pens come and go but the poet's quest to write remains forever and ever.. 10+++ certainly.

a very nice personification... keep writing :) thsnks for sharing.

May your pen be restored and to continue to spread beautiful words. Best Wishes.

Your pen may be broken Obed, but the heart of the poet will continue to bring the words even if written in the sand. Keep going brother poet, a very fine work of art by a young poet. Your friend Lynn

Poets sometimes face periods when they feel they don't have the same power to create. Sometimes it's exactly those moments that represent an even more abundant poetic inspiration in disguise!

Nice poem with beautiful content, flow and title.

it`s being read with one breathe, just like breathing. thx for sharing this lovely piece

the poem tells all about your desire in writing...i appreciate the interest you keep up nicely...good work...thanks...10

Your pen is broken but never broken good theme the power of the poem+++10 regards

nice poem dear Obed++10

a nice relatonship with Pen/ Restore your Pen Obed! ! ! let your Pen writes more than rever, let it writes about yesterday, now, tomorrow and forever... let it writes about Memories, Truth, Love and Peace that Pen is the well of Ink restore it and think, think about the life and its color Black or Pink... ThanksForSharing /

A fine symbolic write....well narrated and expressed well....10

Beautifully written, a pen is the essence of writing Keep it up!

Hi Obed, It seems to us that the pen you were using meant a lot to you. It was a true symbol of so many stories you had already shared with the world. Besides, you suddenly shed tears because you thought 'that pen' was due to accompany your future thoughts, letting you disclose further secrets, we think. Good luck to you!

You know Obed, I feel jus like this now! Only its your pen thats broken and in my case its my spirit! You seem to have a great deal to tell the world! Do it! Dnt let a broken pen impede u!

a good strongly expressed allegorical poem. marks10 shan