Sunday, April 23, 2023

Be Ready To Give Love Comments

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If you want love
Be ready to give love.

The roots must say to the tree
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 May 2023

How can a fish be out of water? Your expression is an established fact, 'The water must say to the fish I am your life don't leave me'

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M.J. Lemon 04 May 2023

Magnificent! A great uplifting verse...

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Galina Italyanskaya 24 April 2023

Lovely lines: one completes the other. Thank you for sharing!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 April 2023

A lovely poem! I like the way you plan your poetic journey dear poetess! Proceed in this great way.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 April 2023

Do you regard Giving Stars to your magnificent poem a big Nonsense? You haven't clicked the button to get these Stars. I wanna give you 5 Stars, dear Nosheen.

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David Wood 23 April 2023

Absolutely perfect poem displaying such wisdom, so very true

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 April 2023

I have enjoyed tremendously the four metaphored stanzas, true fascinating, dear Nosheen

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 April 2023

And to MyFavourites, I am missing the possibility of adding the Stars.

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Anjandev Roy 23 April 2023

This is an absolute gem.....thanks for sharing....

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 23 April 2023

Yes. Love. The more you give the more you get back. Nice poem Nosheen

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 April 2023

This poem has beauty all round it Bravo! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 April 2023

I like the word EGO SHELLS very very much, such a golden touch, dear Nosheen, I have read this gorgeous poem as you have never seen. Top Marks Full.5 Stars.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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