Saturday, August 17, 2013

Be Proud.... Stand Tall! Comments

Rating: 4.9

Believe in who you are
Stop looking for mistakes
Only you are searching
Making your own heart ache
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Lyn Paul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2018

Standing tall with pillars of goodness is definitely great. Best wishes and right plans allow us to grow and get success. Clear day and clear moon motivate us giving us light. An interesting poem is very well penned.10

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Captain Cur 04 September 2018

Reading this poem has made my morning brighter. A positive inspirational poem. It reads like a strong affirmation to repeat to ourselves, self-knowing, self-acceptance and self-forgiveness. We all make mistakes. We are each beautiful in our own unique way. Lets share that beauty the best we can. Just forgive and move on and reach for that next higher poem.

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Chinedu Dike 15 March 2017

Beautiful portrayal of the power of positive thinking. Lovely and motivational. Thanks for sharing.

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 12 April 2015

If only every one accepted who they are, the world would be a much better place to live!

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Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2013

Kudos to all the poets who have commented here. You have only strengthened the poet's call by your words of wisdom. Thanks.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2013

Absolutely marvelous! If there were ways, I would have given this poem more than 10, but since it's not possible to do that, just 10/10. The poem is truly inspiring. Those who are passing through low, will certainly feel high after reading this poem. The last stanza is simply a piece of gem. The note boosts the low morale. WE DON'T NEED THE HIGH HEELS- what a wonderful way of saying so! Well done!

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R.benjamin Abate 30 August 2013

This is a fantastic write. It's very motivational. Thank you.

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Shalini Samuel 23 August 2013

you are motivating us to stand tall with our wisdom..thankyou Lyn.. do read my poems and drop in your votes and comments

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 22 August 2013

As clear as the moon On a heavenly night Just accept WHO you are Be proud...Stand TALL! Life is beautiful. So is your poem. So is your message. Thank you.

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Dee Corpolongo 22 August 2013

Wow....great words to contemplate and read again and again, until it sinks in deep, This here poem says it all, and one that I shall keep! Great write, Thank you.

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Hazel Durham 20 August 2013

Wonderful and inspiring write with lovely lines, I really enjoyed reading this poem!

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Nader Baheri 20 August 2013

the ending is so marvelous.we just look back.have we really lived our lives? felicitation.

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Nontobeko Dlamini 20 August 2013

inspiring...sometimes its poems like this one that reminds us of the strength we have within.

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Dipy Hermonite 19 August 2013

Will inspire a lot of people. Liked it.

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Alookh (matin) 19 August 2013

the title is the poem itself...thank u very much...i feel energetic after reading this poem... i like ur works: D

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Mark Dillon 18 August 2013

Good creed, sometimes we all get a bit bogged down when we don't quite achieve what we set out to do and then question ourselves, but we learn from all endeavours. nice one Lyn, oh, and thanks for the day off.lol

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Unwritten Soul 18 August 2013

I am not born as a mountain to be so tall, i am not like ocean who has heart so deep but i am only a person who can change my world as my soul tell...I bare my soul but no one still can see who i am but i dont care of wrong assumption, bad persuasion, i am tall than others because i am born as me...and I am, Unwritten Soul......inspiring thought by u_Soul

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Shahzia Batool 18 August 2013

i think i needed to read such a poem today...thanks Lyn!

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Jodie Hardy 18 August 2013

A fabulous pick me up piece of poetry, thank you for sharing x

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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2013

Well said Lyn, very true - we should all stand tall, the problem is when others are always trying to put you down. Such people are just feeding their own egos at the expense of others, and we should learn to ignore them.

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