Tuesday, November 7, 2017

Be Prepared Comments

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I have knocked on all life´s doors
they stayed closed, no any sign of coming wars
life felt safe and happiness was everywhere
but how can I learn from life´s experience
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Bill Cantrell 07 November 2017

A wonderfully written poem, the last four concluding lines are a perfect ending to this poem, great writing

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 February 2018

Thank you so much for your amazing feedback, comment and loveliest compliment. Thank you for reading my poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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