Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Be Not Indignant Comments

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Be not indignant, at the suns descent,
The golden moon is heaven sent.
Don't show displeasure when he sun departs,
The moon is made for youthful hearts.
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Juan Olivarez
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 April 2011

Extremely beautiful lines. The poem is a didacting one. Fine poetics. Excellent job. A perfect.....10 Thanks for sharing.....

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