Be not a real man, my boy
When you grow up
For that will surely pull awry
Many faces in disgust.
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'pedestrian': 'synonyms: earthbound, prosaic, prosy uninteresting arousing no interest or attention or curiosity or excitement'
Never daring to question If their claim to victimhood stems From real wrongdoings Or from their own failure to overcome Even the pedestrian challenges of life.
Though not sure how well I'm following this challenging poem, the following lines sounded 'cool' to me. (cont.) ....
It is indeed hard to follow and understand. 'Challenging' is a good choice of words.
Now, you are only being gracious here! Though, really, if you actually find zome bits of 'cool' I suppose I should be happy, though I've come to expect more like dry sarcasm from you! Mind you, your frankness is more vakable
Rod, I see this 'has not been translated into any other language yet' How about translating into English? ? ! My mind and vocabulary may not be up to snuff for this. bri ;)
Hah! I see you haven't lost your dry sense of humour!