Wednesday, February 27, 2019

Be Not A Real Man Comments

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Be not a real man, my boy
When you grow up
For that will surely pull awry
Many faces in disgust.
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Rod M.Peters
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Bri Edwards 28 December 2021

Rod, I see this 'has not been translated into any other language yet' How about translating into English? ? ! My mind and vocabulary may not be up to snuff for this. bri ;)

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Rod Mendieta 28 December 2021

Hah! I see you haven't lost your dry sense of humour!

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Bri Edwards 28 December 2021

'pedestrian': 'synonyms: earthbound, prosaic, prosy uninteresting arousing no interest or attention or curiosity or excitement'

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Bri Edwards 28 December 2021

Never daring to question If their claim to victimhood stems From real wrongdoings Or from their own failure to overcome Even the pedestrian challenges of life.

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Bri Edwards 28 December 2021

Though not sure how well I'm following this challenging poem, the following lines sounded 'cool' to me. (cont.) ....

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It is indeed hard to follow and understand. 'Challenging' is a good choice of words.

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Rod Mendieta 28 December 2021

Now, you are only being gracious here! Though, really, if you actually find zome bits of 'cool' I suppose I should be happy, though I've come to expect more like dry sarcasm from you! Mind you, your frankness is more vakable

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Rod M.Peters

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