Nature has its own laws.
Do not violate a single clause.
Just be natural, do natural,
If you want a youth eternal.
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Wow! This is deep! I like the way you portray a number of themes in a few lines. I see, nature, life, love, abortion e.t.c
@Akhtar Jawad Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your comment here.
@Beauteous Victory Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts on it.
@ Bri Edwards, Thanks for sharing your thoughts. 'does this mean there are abortions which are not sinful? ' No, it doesn't, except in the very rare case when it is done to save a life. You are within your right to differ, but to me, abortion is sinful.
@Bri Edwards (your first comment) , Yes, I guess you 'can be a little bit (at least) wanton' in your.....as you said!
@ Shahzia Batool, 'poetry is a tutorial workshop where lessons based on life are delivered in a pleasant manner...thank you for this! ; I appreciate your observation and the comment you have made. Thank you.
this is what can be called a prescriptive composition based on observation and the teaching of a lesson following...in the teaching terminology poetry is a tutorial workshop where lessons based on life are delivered in a pleasant manner...thank you for this!
We are taking the to exit nature's laws of balancing is most important and we are not following thank u
@ Abhishek Kumar, Thanks for liking it. Gems? I have found many strewn aboard, true gems. But if you call me one, I am truly embarrassed!
A short but wonderful poem...you are one of the gems we have on PH: -)
@ Noreen Carden, Nothing better for a poet to know that his message is received and understood by the audience. Thanks! ! !
Philosophical. It may be short, but there's a clear message that anyone may intercept. Great poem, Mr. Ahsan!
@ Geetha Jayakumar, Thanks for the appreciation. I am inspired.
@Sophy Iminzah Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your appreciative words here. I am truly inspired.