Saturday, September 21, 2013

Be Natural, Do Natural Comments

Rating: 4.3

Nature has its own laws.
Do not violate a single clause.
Just be natural, do natural,
If you want a youth eternal.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Khairul Ahsan 28 June 2014

@Sophy Iminzah Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your appreciative words here. I am truly inspired.

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Centfie Val Chunge 28 June 2014

Wow! This is deep! I like the way you portray a number of themes in a few lines. I see, nature, life, love, abortion e.t.c

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Khairul Ahsan 28 May 2014

@Akhtar Jawad Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your comment here.

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Akhtar Jawad 27 May 2014

a bold and beautiful poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 April 2014

@Beauteous Victory Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts on it.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 November 2013

@ Bri Edwards, Thanks for sharing your thoughts. 'does this mean there are abortions which are not sinful? ' No, it doesn't, except in the very rare case when it is done to save a life. You are within your right to differ, but to me, abortion is sinful.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 November 2013

@Bri Edwards (your first comment) , Yes, I guess you 'can be a little bit (at least) wanton' in your.....as you said!

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Khairul Ahsan 29 September 2013

@ Shahzia Batool, 'poetry is a tutorial workshop where lessons based on life are delivered in a pleasant manner...thank you for this! ; I appreciate your observation and the comment you have made. Thank you.

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Shahzia Batool 29 September 2013

this is what can be called a prescriptive composition based on observation and the teaching of a lesson following...in the teaching terminology poetry is a tutorial workshop where lessons based on life are delivered in a pleasant manner...thank you for this!

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Khairul Ahsan 28 September 2013

@ Lonnie Taylor, Thanks for leaving your comment here.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 September 2013

We are taking the to exit nature's laws of balancing is most important and we are not following thank u

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Khairul Ahsan 26 September 2013

@ Abhishek Kumar, Thanks for liking it. Gems? I have found many strewn aboard, true gems. But if you call me one, I am truly embarrassed!

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Abhishek Mishra 25 September 2013

A short but wonderful poem...you are one of the gems we have on PH: -)

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Khairul Ahsan 25 September 2013

@ Noreen Carden, Nothing better for a poet to know that his message is received and understood by the audience. Thanks! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 25 September 2013

@ Cassandra Jasmine, Thanks!

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Noreen Carden 25 September 2013

Great poem with a very clear message well done

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Cassandra Jasmine 24 September 2013

Philosophical. It may be short, but there's a clear message that anyone may intercept. Great poem, Mr. Ahsan!

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Khairul Ahsan 22 September 2013

@ Geetha Jayakumar, Thanks for the appreciation. I am inspired.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 September 2013

@ Neela Nathdas, Don't you allow sending of messages?

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Khairul Ahsan 22 September 2013

@ Neela Nathdas, Thanks for seeing through. Very kind!

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