Be My Vampire Comments

Nice thought provoking poem. The essence and intricacies of creative writing are aptly captured in the poem. Lovely and brought work of art. Thanks for sharing.

but pain is unpleasant and nobody wants to feel so please stay away from the unpleasents of the now and live for the happiness yet to come

Very creative, I wish I had thought of this idea for a poem of mine. Can I steal it?

Wow, I love it, it is awesome. it has alot of detail.

I have come uninvited, sipped the mellifluous nectar coursing through the vein of your inner thought, and leave satiated, determined to return.

^.^ oh i like this poem a lot, great imagery

This one is great and full of meaning that tingle one's imagination. How I wish that you will be my vampire to sip the nectar of my wisdom that i could share to you the magic of my heart and the burning passion of my tender touch. thanks and best wishes, melvin

Shannon, it is an unusual analogy - but an effective one! Rgds, Ivan

Nice....I think I feel like this too. Have a great 08 L&R Gabe