Wednesday, October 24, 2012

' Be My Star ' Comments

Rating: 3.5

Idolized
Of all person in darkness you shine
Give lantern to my life be bright
Try to entice to be mine
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Ency Bearis
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Hans Vr 15 November 2012

The bitter weet star. Very well written, Ency Excllent

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Aung Si 01 November 2012

Idolized Like a glitters in my eyes Such subtle star enshrined I really appreciate these verses.Well done.my vote is 8.

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Sossi Khachadourian 28 October 2012

I guess your have a big heart filled with love and already you have thousands of shining stars, so touching amazing poem, thank you for sharing it, my best wishes!

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Terry O'leary 25 October 2012

I can feel your pain... good poem... Terry

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