Tuesday, February 15, 2005

Be My Space-Time Einstein Valentine Comments

Rating: 2.3

Yesterday...
Valentine's, you missed it, too bad, he left no forwarding address-
I watched from the pub window
as a van from a high-class Consultant on
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Michael Shepherd
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Sandra Osborne 18 February 2005

Excellent piece, you really nailed it. Nice story, you brought the encounter alive with words. I salute you.10+

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Michael Shepherd 15 February 2005

er, nations. Quiet, H.

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Michael Shepherd 15 February 2005

I'd love to know for real what his mate would have said to him when he got back in the van - in all the different nagtions of the world! I can so guess the English response...

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Rich Hanson 15 February 2005

Nice poem, Michael. You are a keen observer of people.

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Michael Shepherd 15 February 2005

You're right about him - he was covering up his embarrassment at being seen, with the laddish bit - since he had a mate with him, in the front seat!

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Lenchen Elf 15 February 2005

That must be London: -) up here, the majority still look vaguely furtive and hunted if seen clutching flowers: -) Nice poem Michael

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