Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Be My Karla Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ersatz- that's what the average girls are at
Levi jeans on the rack, that multiplies on stack
Without distinction or uniqueness, to fit my peculiarness
Need lady to attire with my love for barbed wire
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Edward Kofi Louis 22 July 2017

Silent flame! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 16 February 2017

Kevin, this is magnificent. At first the title, well, reminded me of Be My Yoko Ono. Then as I read I was pulled into the tale of one Karla who was complicit in someone's dreams, someone's crimes (literal crimes) . She was a seeming partner in life, but ultimately proved only to be going along with the and for the lurid ride. The other girls had ersatz emotions; Karla was all too real. This work reminds me that Bonnie Parker composed poetry to memorialize her accomplishments. This poem is an amazing accomplishment, Kevin.

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Kevin Patrick

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