Be My Comments
I`ve got a dream or I have not,
I shall try my fate or I shall not,
It isn`t that bad. I`ll find my spot.
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'Lively poem...but love is not cruel at all...but ur poem is very sweet simple and well written :) ' Your friend Rohit
***** Very fresh A Hearty poem Very younghood feeling You lose it all As you get old Because you'll find at the end That love is false! _____________________________ ****This poem can become a song
Be my sunlight be my dream be my love bemy warmth! ! you express ur great desires in such simple words.very nice.. thank yu for sharing
Love is an everlasting dream! Just don't lose the hope... Good interpretation of true and innocent feelings... Glavneye ne teryat nadyejdi... 10+++++
Be my first sunrise, My secret dream, But all the same Love is so cruel ..............Desire of the one seeking love. Beautiful and lovely.10+++
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7/21/2025 9:36:30 AM # 1.0.0
the lines touched my heart.very nice.