Be Mine Poem by Rini Shibu

Be Mine

Rating: 4.7


The words when he pour
whispers softly to her soul
It reaches deep to the core
and makes her to sing a song
She just want  him to come along
Because her heart is the place
where he belong
The love she always long for
To changes her world than ever before
In joy the feet rise from the floor
And she like to dance with him a little more
Suddenly when everything stops
He gets on one knee to propose
And from the box a ring pops
Is all a girl wish for
to  brighten her life more

Tuesday, December 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: propose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nudershada Cabanes 11 December 2017

A tender poem of romance with a happy ending. Lovely poem Rini.

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Rini Shibu 11 December 2017

Thank you Nuder.. How ends only matter

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 December 2017

Inner Self! ! To her soul! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 10 December 2017

Thank you so much Edward for your comment

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Quincy Moses 06 December 2017

A very beautiful poem Rini.

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Rini Shibu 06 December 2017

Thanks Quincy..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2017

A lovely poem Rini....The words when he pour whispers softly to her soul. I liked your subtle expression!

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Rini Shibu 06 December 2017

Thank you so much Dillip..

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Muzahidul Reza 05 December 2017

The words when he pour whispers softly to her soul, greatly write dear poetess, thanks for sharing. ++++++++ 10

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Rini Shibu 05 December 2017

Thanks Reza

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