Be Mine Poem by Heather Burns

Be Mine

Rating: 4.8


Be the king
of my heart
I'll be your
queen.

Be my star
I'll be your
star catcher

Gaze with me
at the moon
dawn will
break soon

Tomorrow
the sun will
shine
with you

The
brightness
of my day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Shea 29 July 2013

Very Catching.I felt the universe pass before my very eyes. the brightness was intense.

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David Wood 29 July 2013

A lovely romantic poem to start the day.

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Tribhawan Kaul 29 July 2013

Romantic emotions beautifully expressed. Happy writing.

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Lyn Paul 28 July 2013

A beautiful poem to start my day. Thank You

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Sandra Feldman 28 July 2013

The promise of Love, the best of all callings., poetic beauty So.great in it's simplicity.

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Sallam Yassin 04 August 2013

very romantic gaze at the moon with me the dawn will break soon / kind of solidarity of love with your other soul so sweet

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 August 2013

A lovely romantic poem.. Beautiful...Loved reading it.

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Sekharan Pookkat 01 August 2013

Very romantic poem- You are queen in poetry

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R.j. Wynn 31 July 2013

Very nice, and sweet. Love it.

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Valerie Dohren 31 July 2013

Delightful. A very sweet and romantic write.

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