Be Loyal Comments

A well crafted noble poem......10+++

nice writings like to quote - Intuition, confusion and suspicion They may not bring peace and satisfaction! But obedience, loyalty and trustworthy notion Guide a human to upgrade, to promotion! ! ..... to promote everyone or everything there is need conscience with self knowledge (wisdom) .... nice 10+++

Chan Mongol, Yes the negative sinful aspects of humanity will only lead to death. The last stanza particularly expresses what the whole poem revolves around. I truly appreciate your well thought out descriptive thought provoking work. Thanks for writing.......................Kathy

A creative and compelling composition.

Chan, you're truly a rare GEM. All the ryhmes are worth it. Beautiful choice of words such like PUN - a play on word. I like your style always. Just keep the ink running.

Chan, you're truly a rare GEM. All the ryhmes are worth it. Beautiful choice of words such like PUN - a play on word. I like your style always. Keep the ink running.

Intuition, confusion, suspicion words selected in such a beauty and poem highlights meaningful.