Be Like Water Comments

Be pure like river Be in rhythm have refreshment Be swiftly where needed Be calmly where needed Be needed....beautiful expression. A beautiful poem.

Be deep like ocean/Go beyond limit*****

Be pure like river ganga....adorable expression.

An insightful analogy nicely drawn to drive home your conviction Pratik. Focussed and factual. Thanks for sharing.

pratik, i became aware of you from your comment on my little poem. so now i am exploring what you have posted. this is an excellent extended meditation on water. i'm impressed with it. i can tell reading it that english is not your first language, but the concept, imagination, the way you've visually shaped the poem show good poetic instincts. and, of course, as you point out, we should indeed be like water. glen kappy

Nicely crafted poem. I loved it Sir

Pani re pani tera rang kysa, jismeN mila do us jaisa. A beautiful poem on water.

The poem like a beautiful picture. I think!

Be like water..live like water. The concept of transparency is wonderfully expressed! A very lucid piece of composition! Congrats! !

Wonderful expression of how to live wet just a tiny help, Be in rhythm have refreshment It sounds a little better to my Native English ear to perhaps say, Be in rhythm, be refreshing wonderful poem namaste

I really like this one, Pratik! It's great advice and I will always keep it in mind. Beautiful picture to go with it too.

With humility! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

your meditation on flowing water and your exhortation be like water is so fine. meditate on nature my dear poet. you will find marvels in it..... through nature you can go and reach God... thankyou for this fine poem. tony

A great start with a nice poem, Pratik. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks