Be Like Water, My Friend - Hypnotic Induction Comments

a different side to water....i liked it...do read my poem Emotions...it's about water too....a bit...just a different side of the same coin I guess yours is more readable and more often true and much more important to learn! ! LuV VidZ

The piece has a nice progression. It moves well.

I enjoyed this poem with its sustained metaphor and pleasing rhymes. Good write