Thursday, October 6, 2005

Be Like Water, My Friend - Hypnotic Induction Comments

Rating: 3.7

'Be like water, my friend, be like water,
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Vidushi Khera 09 October 2005

a different side to water....i liked it...do read my poem Emotions...it's about water too....a bit...just a different side of the same coin I guess yours is more readable and more often true and much more important to learn! ! LuV VidZ

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Max Reif 07 October 2005

The piece has a nice progression. It moves well.

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Peter A. Crowther 07 October 2005

I enjoyed this poem with its sustained metaphor and pleasing rhymes. Good write

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