Tuesday, February 5, 2019

Be Kind To Me My God Comments

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With yellowish teeth, two like that of Dracula,
A monster like Angel with horns like spears,
So many arms like snakes, poison in their bites,
Fire of Hell in two eyes that have no tears,
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 March 2019

Standing near the bed of a habitual sinner, A cruel smile telling here I am for a nightmare, A sinner running fastest and a fire chasing him, Faster than the fastest, it will never spare! A beautiful prayer my dear Akhtar........ it is wisdom. tony

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 February 2019

A wonderful and fascinating imaginative write with a meaningful message. Yes, despite being a habitual sinner, God always extends kindness to all who ask His mercy. A single prayer and God will come to the rescue. Beautifully and cleverly written. Liked how the great Poet has woven his imagination.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 February 2019

and God is KIND TO YOU SIR HAPPY BIRTHDAY GREETINGS ARE DUE ON 8 FEB 2019 THE WHOLE WORLD OUGHT TO KNOW AKHTAR JAWAD OF PAKISTON IS THE POET WHO! I WISH ALL KNEW and glad I am all DO HBDAY SIR TO YOU

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