Let his eyes net,
net her,
his sweet sweat,
sweat her,
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This kind sound sweet when you say be kind mean you so sweet..like it it really a simple but triple smiles :) _Unwritten Soul
Really glad I found this poem, you are a talented writer that's for sure.
Sweet kindness light her face beguile her with your scent [sweat]...very nice words here from a Sally I've just met.glad I dropped by, regards
The rhythm is lovely and apt and the diction, the particular way you use words like 'sweat' and so forth is just so enchanting....an enchanting poem, Sally
Wonderful word play blended with feeling emotion… Thanks Ma’am for such a poem 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
sweet, romantic and sensitive poem, ..............u surely know how to net the readers........
an heart rendering poem....... be kind be sweet.written from the heart.......
a good poem Sally. a great play on words.
Thank you for your comment. Much appreciated. Sally