Be It Triumph Or Torment Comments

This humble little poem provides a clean and clear-cut definition of life

Hi Bipasha, Lovely poem. A little philosophical as an afterthought. But while reading the poem, one is carried away by the wonderful narrative. Life has its ups and downs. But, every day, every up or down carries a lesson, which one should try and learn. This would make our life worthwhile.

I like the back and forth of your poem illustrating that life has ups and downs, and it is what you make of them amounts to life. A 10

A beautiful and thoughtful poem. It conveys the true essence of life. Liked the last stanza.Beautiful thoughts well conveyed.

amen to your closing two lines, bipasha. a couple of my recent postings deal with adversity, with the torment part of life. one is titled holes. you might like it. -glen

That's a good way to lead yourself. Keep up