Be Humble Even In Your Greatness Comments

Your stars will not last forever. Your crowns will not surely endure. Very well written.Unfathomable simply. Do read my RED on page 2

Be humble Even in your greatness. Be noble Even if in you own the stars..what an assertion in saying si. one becomes great evenshow little humbleness.. it increses its greaness..lovely poem and i wiould love you come outmany more in this way...i liked it very much...kudo to your efforts.....10 red mine making sense....miss i miss you....a place called home

Very well written indeed. It should be read by all the arrogant and snobbish people on this planet.

Sorry you feel that some one would wish to own this poem. Changes needed are: 4th line- you probably meant to say, even 'if' you own the stars. 4th verse you say, But it is not an excuse To live a life of being humble. I should think that it is a reason for being humble. The thought in the poem is very good and these typos only mar the presentation not the intent. Adeline